The Mortal Instruments - Final

Hi all

Here is the final copy of my Fan Fiction.

I’ve posted some links to Cassandra Clare’s (the author of the Mortal instruments) website which give you a description of the characters, setting and the general gist of it all.

My FF takes place after the third book in the series (‘City of Glass’).

Hope you all enjoy

Rukuwai Linstead-Panoho

City of Anguished Warriors

Part One:



His fingers traced the contours of her face with a feather light touch that sent heat rushing from the pit of her stomach. Clary smiled warmly, keeping her eyes closed as his fingers danced down the side of her throat and to her bare shoulder. She gasped. Oh how luscious and tender the touch of his skin made her feel, if only she were to look upon the face of her mysterious lover.


Her eyes slowly opened.


At first, all she could see was a pure white-light, and then she saw the dark outline of a figure manifest; as if from hell itself. Instantly, her world of ecstasy crumbled into oblivion. Her mind pulsed with disbelief as his dark silhouette sauntered towards her, still slightly distorted by the light. She had somehow fallen to her knees and now looked up through her fiery red hair and glared. His black eyes fixed on her.


“Hello sister”



Clary woke with a gasp. She pulled herself from the web of tangled sheets that made up her bed and in her haste, fell to the ground with a loud thump. “Ouch!” She moaned, leaning back against her bed for support.


Her mind was spinning after the nightmare, his smile still clearly visible in her mind. For weeks Jonathan Morgenstern had plagued her every thought, mocking her in his loathsome way.


Clary had tried almost everything to bring an end to it, but even with the help of her warlock friend Magnus, the Psychic Shield he had created still did not work.


She exhaled and began arranging her bed neatly. Magnus was the only other person who knew about Jonathan and he was sworn to secrecy. Clary had tried to tell her family and friends, but Jonathan was one subject that could never be discussed.


Not even Clary could admit the possibility that the murderer of her one-true-love, Jace, was still alive.


Rather than allowing her mind to slip into the heart breaking matter of Jace’s death, she withdrew to the day she had first told Magnus about Jonathan.


His first reaction was to tell Clary’s mother immediately, but then thinking better, chose instead to offer his services. “I can help you,” he had said, cutting Clary off from her long winded speech about how repulsive Jonathan was. She looked up at him and frowned.


How could she be so stupid to believe that Jace's death had only hurt her. Everyone was grieving, even Magnus. 


She exhaled slowly and nodded for him to continue.


“Clary, I can seriously help you. If you allow me to create a Psychic Shield against his memory, similar to what your mother once asked of me, I can make sure your brother never troubles you again.” His smile was grand, holding just a touch of sympathy for her, sympathy that Clary knew all too well.


He raced through the small living area they had been sitting in and quickly pulled books from his shelf.


At first she had been hesitant, fearful of what might happen if the shield did not work, but when she had tried to voice her opinions Magnus countered them with his own.


“I am not the Greater warlock of New York for nothing you know. A Psychic Shield is hardly something that is considered dangerous. The only thing that could affect my powers would be if I was somehow drained of energy, but the likelihood of that actually happening is….. Well slim. Now sit!”


Her laugh had echoed throughout the room that day. She had never heard Magnus sound so sure about himself – she paused, thinking back to what Magnus had been saying.


The only thing that could affect my powers would be if I was somehow drained of energy.


No.


Magnus was in trouble.


Her feet seemed to fly as she thundered down the stairs and into the kitchen. It explained everything, why the shield wasn’t working, why Magnus looked so weary for the past couple of days and Clary knew who was to blame.


It was her brother, Jonathan Morgenstern.

She ripped open the back door and clambered out into the brisk morning air, already short for breath but she would not stop. She had to find Magnus and warn him of what was happening and soon.

The winding streets of Alicante were a maze that Clary weaved through swiftly. In the distance she could make out the small blue house that was home to her dear friend and without invitation she burst through the door.

The house was empty.

Her footsteps echoed off the sides of the walls creating a lonely feeling deep in the pit of her stomach. She urged herself forward into the study where she had revealed her burdens to Magnus only weeks ago.


A sickening feeling washed over her and she paused with her hand resting upon the doorknob. She knew something bad had happened. She could feel the dark energy lurking in the room.


Slowly, she turned the handle.


Magnus stood with his back to Clary, his body slightly bent in agonizing angles.


He cried out in pain, but the invisible force that held him captive only tightened its hold. Clary gasped as she stepped into the room.


Then she heard his voice, a voice so sinister and evil that she knew who it was even though she could not see him.


“Ah Clarissa, thank you for joining us,” Magnus’s body began to quiver and then suddenly he dropped to the ground unconscious.


Clary rushed to his side instantly fearing his death, but just as she was about to reach out and touch him, her hand was deflected by an invisible wall.


She looked up at her brother and snarled. “What have you done to him?” she yelled, rising to her feet in challenge. Jonathan only smiled. “Fear not little sister. I have not come for your friend,” he paused and looked her dead in the eye. His eyes were as black as night.


“I have come for you”

Links:

Shadowhunter’s:
http://www.shadowhunters.com/mortalinstruments/shadow-hunters.php
Characters:
http://www.shadowhunters.com/mortalinstruments/characters.php
Setting:
http://www.shadowhunters.com/mortalinstruments/city.php

Spaced Fan Fiction (Final)

Spaced – “Procrastination”

Spaced is a British television sitcom written by and starring Simon Pegg and Jessica Stevenson, and directed by Edgar Wright.  It is noted for its rapid-fire editing, frequent pop culture references and jokes, eclectic music, and displays of surrealism and non-sequitur humour.  Two series of seven episodes each were broadcast in 1999 and 2001.

Tim Bisley (Pegg) and Daisy Steiner (Stevenson) are two London twenty-somethings who meet by chance in a café while both are flat-hunting.  Despite barely knowing each other, they conspire to pose as a young professional couple in order to meet the requisites of an advertisement for a relatively cheap flat in the distinctive building at 23 Meteor Street, Tufnell Park, which is owned by and also houses the landlady, Marsha Klein (Julia Deakin).  Also in the building is Brian Topp (Mark Heap), an eccentric conceptual artist who lives and works on his various pieces in the ground floor flat.  Frequent visitors are Daisy's best friend, Twist Morgan (Katy Carmichael) and Tim's best friend, Mike Watt (Nick Frost), who ends up becoming a lodger after Marsha's daughter Amber Weary "flies the nest".

The series largely concerns the colourful and surrealistic adventures of Tim and Daisy as they navigate through life, decide on what they want to do with their lives, come to terms with affairs of the heart, and try to figure out new and largely unproductive ways of killing time. Tim and Daisy repeatedly stress that they are not a couple to everyone but Marsha, but despite (or because of) this, romantic tension develops between them, particularly during the second series.
From Wikipedia

This Fan Fiction is set soon after the end of the second series, but in modern day.  Life is going on as normal.  Despite Marsha finding out the truth about Tim & Daisy by the end of series two, I am assuming that she single-mindedly believes they should be together.

Daisy sat gawking at the typewriter as usual, full of hope and doubt.  Today she will write that groundbreaking article on the fickle nature of student fashion as she had been planning for months now, and send a copy to that old fart the Editor of the Observer to name one.

She wasn’t sure how long Brian had been standing behind her in the open doorway, he was for all intents and purposes naked, apart from a pair of wellies and some moth-bitten mucky Y-fronts.  Blue and green paint was smeared over his abdomen in a chaotic array, his right hand was bound in surgical tape, obscuring the use of his fingers completely.  She could have sworn there was something making an appearance down the left side of his inner thigh, but looking at it to make a positive ident might be like looking directly into the sun.

Daisy wondered when they had attained the level of familiarity whereas they could walk into each other’s flats practically bollock naked.  She entertained the thought of one day turning the tables on Brian, and rocking up casually to his flat downstairs in her underwear.  This thought was soon quashed as she flashed back to earlier this morning and more specifically the reflection she saw in the mirror of what she actually looked like in her underwear.  Daisy now considered the awkward aftermath of subjecting Brian to a doorway full of cellulite and idiotic smiles.

“Alright..,” said Brian eventually.  Daisy welcomed the interruption.

“You, um.. heard from Twist?” he mumbled.

Daisy looked puzzled.  “She’s coming back to London in a month.  Don’t you read her Facebook page?”

“Don’t have.. Facebook,” said Brian, shifting his eyes left and right to avoid eye-contact.

“So you’re not the Brian Topp with the picture of a dead raccoon as his profile picture?” She replied. “I thought it was you being, y’know.. arty”.

“Uh.. no,” he said.  “Don’t have a computer”.

In retrospect this didn’t surprise Daisy.  Obviously then all this time she’s been sending friend requests to this raccoon Brian, and assumed our Brian was just being an aloof tosser and not replying.  Keep that one to myself, thought Daisy.

Brian grimaced.  He felt an ominous gnawing in his gut.  His initial conclusion pointed towards those pills Tim gave him two nights ago.  He froze when he suddenly realized what it was.

The smell of fresh tobacco smoke and wine enveloped him from behind.

“Allo Brian..,” Marsha said with an unnervingly low pitch.

He nervously turned round just as she exhaled a lungful of Menthol Superkings in his general direction.  

“Hello Marsha!” said Daisy chirpily. “Cup of tea?”

“Rent was due last Saturday, Brian” Marsha said, eyes fixed on Brian.

“You know Brian, if you can’t afford it this month that’s perfectly fine..,” she coughed and continued huskily  “As you know there are other ways you can… leave a deposit in my account”.

She took an inhumanly long drag, her eyes widened looking Brian in the eye, an enormous orange cone forming on the end of the cigarette which seemed to defy the laws of science. Marsha’s passion burned. 

Out of awkwardness, or stupidity, Daisy interjected at this point.  “Brian’s OK for money, Marsha.  He’s been doing regular art exhibitions.  ..and stuff”.

“..haven’t you Brian?”  Daisy wished she’d stayed in bed today.

“Art’s not about money Daisy..”.  Brian seemed a little miffed.  “Bye..,” he said meekly, looking at the floor as he left and closed the door quietly behind him.

“Never mind about Mr. Misery guts,” Marsha smirked as she joined Daisy at the table.  “Fancy a glass of Shiraz, Kitten?”

“Marsha, I’ve..”

Before she could finish, a few generous glugs of red sloshed into an empty glass, some mischievous crimson projectiles setting up permanent residence on Daisy’s writing paper.

Daisy glanced at her watch and was briefly disturbed by the fact that it was 10:37am, but then her train of thought shifted to speculating how Marsha, cigarette in hand, had managed to conceal a bottle of wine and two glasses until now.

“How’s Amber?” Daisy sipped the wine, and resigned to another unproductive day.

“Forget Lady Muck.  How’s things with you and Tim?” 

“Me and Tim?” Daisy produced a disappointing fake laugh. “Marsha as you know we’re just friends”.  She could feel Marsha her eyeballing her.  “Tim’s got his life and I’ve, y’know.. got.. my things..”

“You two kids wouldn’t know true love if it jumped up bit you on the short and curlies,” Marsha slurred slightly.  Daisy raised an eyebrow as she processed what was just said.

The door behind them flung open.  Mike neatly commando-rolled into the centre of the living room.  “And that’s how I saved the pet shop..” he said, looking back towards the door. 

Tim soon followed looking slightly disinterested.

“Where’ve you been this early? I thought you were still asleep,” Daisy said.  

“Me and Mike went to the post office.  Sent some British stuff over to Sophie, stuff she can’t get over there,” said Tim excitedly.

“And how is Sophie?” Daisy felt she stressed an adequate amount of contempt on the word ‘Sophie’, a level of contempt she reserved purely for thin, pretty bitches.

“She’s great!” Tim smiled “She told me she’s coming over in the spring, or possibly after summer.  Depends on work”.

Daisy scowled as she imagined Sophie sitting outside a Seattle café sipping espressos, stringing Tim along via her iphone, whilst no doubt on the sly she’s shagging a guy with a ridiculous sun tan called Cooper.

“Anyway we’re going out tonight,” Tim said “Tyres has got some fresh MD powder in from Denmark, we’re gonna get kur-aay-zee!” Tim realised the way he just said the word crazy was immensely annoying.  He could see Daisy rolling her eyes.

“I’ve got a date tonight,” said Daisy, matter-of-factly.

Marsha coughed up a huge cloud of semi absorbed smoke into Daisy’s eyes.  She squinted at Daisy as if unconvinced.

“What? Who? Who is he?” said Tim, slightly raised voice.

“You don’t know him,” She replied

“What’s his name?” Tim asked.  “Yeah what’s his name?” added Mike quickly.

“John…”  “athan..” Daisy gathered her thoughts.  “He.. he works in I.T.  He thinks I’m very sweet”.

“Sweet?” mocked Tim

“Haha because.. y’know, I still use a typewriter..,” She added with an inane grin.

“How come I don’t know him?” Tim sounded upset.

”Battlestar Galactica is on in a minute,” Mike stated with importance.

“Brilliant!” Said Tim & Daisy in unison, jumping into life.  They leapt on the couch, Tim claiming the remote by childishly wiping it in and out of his arse crack, much to Daisy’s disapproval.

Marsha shook her head and left the flat just as the Battlestar theme tune was in full swing, only to slink back in a minute later and retrieve the Shiraz.

Spirit Away fanfiction draft

“Hello,  Chihiro Og speaking”

“Hello, Miss Og, according to your description, we have search entire town, but there is no place called bathhouse or any thing that is relate to it have been find…”, the men was speaking non stop, but noting went into my ears.

“Thank you, Good bye”, the excitement that I had is now gone.

Is there really no possibility for me to find him? Ten years ago he helped me to survive in that scary bathhouse and help me to find my name back again, but now where is he.

When I was total preoccupation thinking about him, the smell of burning have come out from the kitchen.

“Oh”, I was rushed off my feet, and ran to the kitchen to turn off the heat.

“Oh my god, what have you done” mum gently complained. At same time she throw the food into bin and clean up the kitchen for me.

“Thank you mum, love you”.

After receiving that disappoints massage, I grab the painting equipment and went to the temple. When I arrived I put the coin in my palm, and clasped it with pair of hand soaked with sweat, closed my eyes and pray. For me temple is a place that full of good spirits. No matter do you believe in those bodies of gods that made from the mud or whether they can help you to achieve the wish, people who come to this quiet place all shows their respect and faithful toward the god.

 I use all of my power to throw the coin into the air, seeing it fly in the air it feel like my entire life is control by this little coin.

“God, if you really can help others to achieve their wish, please let me see him for one more time”.  The coin dropped, I open my eyes,  and thinking that if this wish is too big and difficult to achieve it , maybe one day the sun will drop down to the earth.

I walk forward, standing beside the enormous  tree and try to choose a place that will help me to talk the best photo of the temple, it start to become my habit, to talk the photo of this place every time I came.

“Sorry, do you have a pencil I can borrow, I break my one”, I turned my body toward the voice and notice there is a person drawing behind me.

I gaze at him and thinking is that him, he got a pair of clean eye just like the eyes of new-born baby. He is wearing a white t shirt whit a pair of blue jean and black shoes.

When I was about to stand up, my attention start to catch by his beautiful drawing, and his signature,  Haku his name, that i almost forgot it.

Without thinking I write spirit of the Kohaku River  in the sand.  The sound of footstep is getting close to me; he is standing in the back of me.

I look at him with millions of unanswered questions in my mind. He bend down. Gentle smile emerged on his face I feel my heart beat faster.

“What is spirit of the Kohaku River?”

“Ah, friend of mine”.

“So, spirit of Kohaku River is a person” he starts to spoke softly, and stop drawing his picture. “For some reason, I feel very familiar about this name”

The unanswered questions in my head, seems to be sure.

“He must be very important person to you”.

“Yes” I start to nod my head like a Robot.

“At least you still remember his name, not like me…”

I start to notice the place that he is painting, clean road, with green glass land and in the end of the road there is a Chinese style gate that has red brick corridors. This is the place where I and he separate. 

“That place…”

“very strangely, this place have continues appear in my dream, it seems in this place, I farewell to someone who is very important to me, although I did not want her to leave, I promise to her that one day I will go to find her...” he stopped “but I can’t even remember her name, not even her appearance, It's ridiculous, right?” there is a sad and hopeless smile on his face.

“No, this is not ridiculous” I answered firmly. He seems very surprised about my how serious I was, then he smile.

He turned his body behind me; I look at his back, with a happy smile on my face. Yes, it must be him, I am sure he really is him.

There is a river that appear in my life, when I stay in that lonely deserted shore, just because wanting to hear gurgling sound of water, so I no longer lonely in the dark; when I walk in the desert, all I hope is that this river can appear, then I will no longer tolerate the hot. I do all this, just for that ordinary river, he flow quietly; I didn’t know how many years both of us has experience being separate. Finally, once again he appeared in front of me…, we finally met again.

I suddenly understand why we meet each other again, because within each of our heart there is a never fade drawing, only belongs to us.

 

 

Naruto's dairy Fan fiction draft

Title: Naruto’s Dairy

Quick introduce Naruto back ground:

The story is going to talk about Naruto’s Dairy. The Dairy introduces what he has done daily and his thinking.

First let me simply introduce Naruto. Naruto is a major character in the Naruto manga. In the story, Naruto had a dream to become the leader of the Konoha when he was young. The whole story was talking about Naruto’s life. It covers the following stories 1) how he grew up 2) how he defeated the war and misson 3) how he solved problems 4) how he lost his best friend Sasuke 5) how he became a hero in Konoha village and 6) how he saved the war in the Shinobi war. (Sasuke was a genius shinobi, all the females like him very much in his age.)

I used the Naruto for the background, it was happened in his life before the Third Konoha leader pass away, he wrote down his opinion in his dairy book.

It is my first FF, please giving me some advice if I wrote it wrong. Thanks

2^th of March sunny

I’m really happy today…..

It was my first day attended to Shinobi School in Konoha. It’s orientation for the new Shinobi students. In the school I saw a lot of new students same age like me.

I met Sasuke, I ran over to him and asked him “what’s up, what are you doing here?” Sasuke was trying to be cool and replied “I want to become the greatest shinobi, so that’s why I’m here”.

After I heard what he told me, then I really wanted to surpass him and challenge him.

3^th of March sunny

First day of class……

When I arrived in the school, I saw Sasuke, there were lots of girls walking around Sasuke, even Sakura was around him. I felt so jealousies on him. But Sasuke still be cool, even girls were kiaaa(screming by girls) and talking to him.

In the first class, I found out that Sasuke and Sakura were at the same class with me. Our teacher was Iruka teacher. He put us in the same group. Our first lesson was introducing ourselves.

Our time table was

9.00 – 10.30 book lessons

11.00 – 12.00 Ninjutsu lesson

12.00 – 1.00 lunch break

1.00 – 3.00 continue Ninjutsu lesson and class finished at 3pm.

4^th of March raining

Learned the new Ninjutsu today....

I was so excited today, because we were going to learn the new Ninjutsu called “Kakejitsubunshin”.

Iruka teacher taught us how to concentrate our Chakura to whole body and make gesture for “Kakejitsubunshin”.

5^th of March Sunny

Practise Kakejitsubunshin

In the class, Iruka teacher asked me and Sasuke to go in front of the class to show Kakejitsubunshin to everyone. Sasuke made perfect in this Ninjutsu.

Sad thing was I failed this Ninjutsu. In the class everyone laughed at me, I felt so shame.

Only Iruka teacher encouraged me.

6^th of March Sunny

After school today……

Iruka teacher shouted me Ramen for dinner. I was really happy. Because Iruka teacher said eat much as you could.

In the meantime, Iruka teacher knew my situation. He understood that both of my parents were dyed in the nine tail beast war when I was a baby.

Iruka teacher told me, same situation happened to him as well. His parents were dyed in that war too. Iruka teacher was trying to encourage me, told me to stop doing funny Ninjutsu in the class.

“Few months passed by……”

3^th of May Sunny

Studied the Ninjitsu book……

I was reading a book in classroom. Sasuke went into the class, saw me and Shikamaru were reading a Ninjitsu book. Sasuke was sarcasm at me. He said “Great! Our team member is finally out of the intellectuals“.

 I thought Shikamaru was a little bit pissed off, kept questioning on Sasuke:  “I read book every day, never heard you Praised me huh?”

Sasuke: “praised you for what?

As you see, even you studied a lot of Ninjitsu book, I still can’t think anything to praise you.

Ar….probably is your brain structure were a bit strange, IQ was not in the level of the normal human, how can I understand an idiot thinking? Ayi.....idiot will never understand genius.”

Shikamaru didn’t reply at all, I just heard he said “Can’t be bother argue with you.” And he kept mumbling. I just realised Shikamaru was a guy didn’t like trouble things, and liked mumbling person!!

4^th of May Sunny

Big day today….

Today was my big day at school, because our Iruka teacher was going to give us the head band with symbolize of Konoha logo to become genin (which is lower class shinobi).

Before that, we needed to pass some of Ninjitsu test.

Apparently I passed the Ninjitsu test by lower mark, and received the head band.

I was so happy, and then Iruka teacher shouted the whole class for dinner, to celebrate for us to graduate. After a month there would be the Chunin’s exam.

7^th of May cloudy

Produce the dried fish……

I just realised I broke and I ate instant noodles every day, so unhealthy.

I needed to earn some money to get rich. So I produced dry fish today.

I went to the river to fishing, and I caught 10 fish. I went home to produce them and hung them in the room to get dry.

8^th of May sunny

Smell really bad in my room…..

When I woke up in the morning, I smelt stink in my room, because of dry fish was hanging in my room.

But luckily it was sunny today. I moved all the dry fish to outdoor and let them drying under the sun.

10^th of May sunny

In the class today, we separated students in ten groups. Every group would get a Jounin teacher to teach us to prepare the Chunin exam after one month.

Lucky thing was Sasuke, sakura and I were in the Kakashi teacher’s group. (Kakashi were in the Anbu shinobi, which was doing the secret mission or protect important people.)

13^th of May cloudy

Sold all my dried fish…….

I went to the outdoor market to sale my dried fish I made. Lots of people came to buy.

After 2 hours, all my dried fish was sold. I’m really happy. An old lady who bought my dried fish told me that it was good quality. I answered back, of course it was homemade and I used high-quality source to make.

I was thinking if I can’t be a shinobi, should I become the dried fish maker person?

1^th is June sunny

Chunin’s exam today…..

I was so nervous today, because of chunin exam, unlucky I was battle with genius Neji today.

Lucky thing was I won the battle today, but I injured badly too. In the middle of the Chunin exam, other country shinobi was sneak attack the Konoha.

The chunin exam stopped by the intruder.after the war, the third leader of the Konoha was passed away in the war. Everyone couldn’t accept these things happen so suddenly.

Fan Fictions Reviews

My fan fiction reviews are based on anime movies that Miyazaki Hayao has produced.

My Neighbour Totoro  

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7217945/1/Once_Upon_a_Totoro

Satsuki and Mei have move to the country side with their father. Their house is in a quiet and beautiful place, where there is huge camphor tree beside it. One day Satsuki and Mei accidently saw the Totoro, and this is a movie about the relationship between Satsuki, Mei and Totoro.

At the beginning of this fan fiction, the author has clearly state what he/she want to talk about by using number of questions. It allows the readers to know whether they want to read this fan fiction, just by reading the first paragraph. In the body paragraph the author start to answer the questions by doing the summary of the film. It might disappoint the readers, who just want to know the answers for the questions that author have mention at the first paragraph, instead of reading the whole summary and find out the answers.

Kiki’s delivery service

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8269618/1/Kikis_Big_Fall

 

In order to be a qualified witch, at age of 13 Kiki have to go to a new place and live there for one year to prove that  she have the ability of become a qualified witch.

At the first paragraph it clearly state from what part of the film that author want to start develop his/her own writing. The work of the author is completely different from the film, which means that the author has used  own imagination to write a piece of creative writing. In this piece of writing the author has mention the relationship between human and witches.It emphasizes that human and witches are completely different creature, and in human’s mind the witches are evil,which cause Kiki to be killed by human. At the end of the story, author have keep emphases  that this is her/his first story, which will make the readers willing to give author the positive feedback instead of negative one.  

 

Castle in the sky

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3182239/1/What_if

Laputa is a city flying in the sky; it has been destroyed. Pazu have met Sheeta who fall down from the airship and she is heir of the city. Sheeta have a ‘volucite’ crystal, which will bring her happiness and scourge. The military and the pirates all want to have the crystal, they try to kill Sheeta and get it.  Pazu want to save Sheeta, so they escape from military and pirates.

 This fan fiction is about an idea that author and his/her friend have come up with. The author has used the characters and some of the setting in the film, to develop his/ her own story. It seen like that the author want both Sheeta and Pazu to travel from the past to modern day and go to Walmart. Instead of making the film very serious the author had add some humour on her/his own creative writing.

Ponyo

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6993202/1/I_Want_You

Ponyo is a fish girl who wants to see a bigger world, so she floats on the back of a jellyfish and went to other part of the ocean, but end up stranded in the bottle and a boy called Sosuke recused her.  An unexpected tsunami has caused Sosuke to injure himself, and make Ponyo touch the blood of human. Socuke notice Ponyo can turned into a human, and he try to help Ponyo, but thing didn’t go in the way they want to be…

The author has used a poem to express her/his feeling about the film. The poem itself is very easy for others to understand what author is trying to say.  The poem is focus on the main theme, which is about the relationship between Ponyo and Sosuke. It shows that the love between those two characters has very deep impression to the author, which allows the author to express his/her feeling using the poem. Instead of spell the boy’s name as Sosuke, the author had spell as saskue.

Porco Rosso

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5876106/1/COMING_SOON_TO_A_SCREEN_NEAR_YOU

Within Mediterranean region the ships are often robbed by pirates. The nemesis of the pirates is Marco Pagot who earns reward by hunting down the air pirates. For some reason he turned into a pig and people start to call him Porco Rosso. As the Mamma Aiuto gang’s plane have been hunt down by Porco Rosso, the gang have find Curtis to assist them to revenge.

This is a very simple fan fiction. The main message that the writer want to get across is that people should watch the film. The author has got into a point, that this film has leaved lots of unanswered questions to the audience. The writer has mention that this film allows the readers to have their own idea, on what the film is going to happen. This fan fiction is mainly focus on the Porco Rosso which is the main character of the film. The writer suggests that this film allow the audience to create their own story on whether Porco Rosso will turn into human again.

 

 

FanFic Review 1

Naruto side story Review

Kakashi's Story Link 1

kakashi is an ANBU. an elite ninja. When he gets asked to oversee the new candidates for the anbu team, he picks the first female Aya hatsutoshi, 19 years old to join. All his friends and hers both joke about them falling in love. but what will kakashi do when he does fall for her, Aya with kakashi? what will kakashi do for her to be safe?


Review
This story is good creative about the Naruto, because in the real story, they never tell us the Kakashi's his own story about his life when he was in the ANBU and his love story too. the story is really interesting to move on.


Back to the past Link 2

The story is talk about Naruto and Sasuke the last of there friends and village get the chance to go back in time. they must right the wrong and bring a better future.


Review
The story is interesting about the naruto and sasuke to bring the the new future, its a good idea to show up the story like that, also it's a little messy in the story.

After the war Link3
The story is talk after the war end ( the war with Tobi),  Sasuke was thinking to attack Konoha to rebuild the ushiha clan after the konoha after the Tobi told Sasuke. Sasuke is thinking about the suigetsu had completed task is collecting the 7 swords after the 7 swords man got defeat, juugohad no goals excepts follow him. will they following with  Sasuke to attacking Konoha? Sasuke is going to build the military power in the Otogakure first.
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The story is getting interesting for Sasuke building their own military power to fight with Konoha village. the story is getting fun now.wish the next chapter will show up.

Best friends to lovers  Link 4

The story is talk about naruto's first love. When Naruto met the Chi in the Swing place. in after 6 years, Naruto ask jiji why did council banish chi?

Kyuubi ( which is inside of naruto heart beast.)asked who is chi? naruto just asnswered she was my first best friend. In once of the training or practise, chi just showing up in secretly?

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I think is chi to show up, it's interesting story in POV, make people want to read in next chapter.

The short letters of Kakuzu and Hidan Link5

The story is between Hidan and Kakauzu, which they were a team of Akatsuki. Both of them always doing the mission in the team, one day Hidan tells Kakuzu something very strange, about Hidan think kakazu like him.

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It's really weired about this story for two man love each other, but it is fun, looking forward in next chapter.